剑三雷首飞电:2011年高考英语写作复习指导资料

情景作文

【典题在线】

假设2008年2月12日是你父亲的生日，下面三幅图描绘的是你给父亲买完礼物后乘坐地铁回家时经历的一件事。请根据图示，用英语写一篇日记记叙这件事，并谈谈自己的感受。                              (2008¡¤天津)

注意：1. 词数不少于100；

2. 可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：地铁（列车）subway train

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              (日期)

           Today was                 (某个节日，某人生日等). In the morning              (做了什么事情). And when             (又做了什么事情).

        （接下来的一个时间）,                        (叙述人们各自的活动).                (事情的情况). After a minute, I               (做了什么事情).                (取得的结果). She said            .

           Today was              (总结). I felt              (感受).

【佳篇品读】

February 12th, 2008

              Today was my father's birthday. I got on the subway train after I had bought the present. And when I was on the subway train, I imagined the situation where I gave the present to my father, and my father would be very happy.

        On the next station, there was a lady who had no seat in front of me. She also had two heavy bags. After a minute, I stood up and offered the seat to her. She was very happy and appreciated. She said “Thank you!” to me, which made me feel proud.

       Today was best. I felt the fun to help other people.

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假设你是李华，2008年奥运会期间你和你的同学们参加了志愿者工作。请根据下图提示，写一篇日记，介绍你们当志愿者的经历并简单谈谈你的感受。日期为2009年8月28日。

One possible version:

August 28th, 2009

           In August 2008, Olympic Games were held in Beijing. During the Games I was a volunteer.

          Before the Games, all of us received special training. Under the guidance of the trainer, we got to know what jobs we could do and what we should pay attention to.

          During the Games, some of us stood outside the stadium, guiding the audience to go into the Bird's Nest with loudspeakers. Some worked at the information center and offered all kinds of help. Others acted as tour guides and took foreigners to some places of interest, such as the Great Wall and the Summer Palace, which helped them to get a better understanding of Chinese culture.

            Today I felt being a volunteer was a valuable experience for me. Not only did I help others, but also I made many friends. Besides, I felt I could do something for our country.

议论文

【典题在线】           （2009¡¤12¡¤山东潍坊模块检测）

人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。  

注意：1. 文章必须包括表格中的全部内容。

2. 参考词汇： 网络朋友online friend(s)；

上当受骗to be cheated

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Recently our class had a heated discussion over whether            (探讨的问题)or not. Different people have different opinions. Some people say yes. They think that      (支持的理由一). And       (支持的理由二). Besides             (支持的理由三，此点略低于前两个).

Others, however, think students should not. They say           (反对的理由一). And         (反对的理由二). In addition(以别于前面的Besides),        (反对的理由三).

It is my opinion that         (自己的观点)students should place their study, health and safety before other things.            (理由一至二).

【佳篇品读】

Recently our class had a heated discussion over whether middle school students should make friends online. Different people have different opinions. Some people say yes. They think that the internet helps make more friends. And chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions. Besides they may even get help with their foreign language studies.

Others, however, think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time. And they should spend time more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.

It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can easily find it in our classmates and other people around us.

【模仿show】

最近，你们学校组织高三学生进行了一场讨论。主题是¡°要不要集中进行晚自习¡±。根据下图提供的信息，写一篇英语短文，客观地介绍一下讨论的情况，要涵盖所有要点。

One possible version:

    Recently our class had a heated discussion over whether they were willing to have the evening selfstudy at school or not. Different people have different opinions.

    60 percent of the students think its a good idea to have the evening selfstudy at school. They think they can do better in their study with the help of the teachers. Also, they can concentrate on their lessons better in the classroom and with company of their fellow classmates.

    25 percent of the students, however, think students should not. They suppose that they may get disturbed by others and there are possible dangers on their way home alone.

    At the same time, still 15 percent of the students dont have a clear answer to the question. They say they will go to school to have evening selfstudy if they are asked to, but they promise they can also do well at home.

应用文(书信)Ⅰ

【典题在线】

（2008¡¤全国Ⅱ）

假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。

要点:1. 参加中文学习班;

2. 看中文书刊、电视节目；

3. 学唱中文歌曲；

4. 交中国朋友。

¡­¡­

注意:1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2. 开头语已为你写好；

3. 词数100左右。

June 8, 2008

Dear Peter,

Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

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日期

称呼,

Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to       .

Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to         (第一件应该做的事情), as youll be able to        (手段). Then, it also helps to      (第二件应该做的事情).

Besides, it should be a good idea to     (第三件应该做的事情). You can also            (第四件要做的事情).              (这样做的好处).

        (表达祝愿).

                                               落款

【佳篇品读】

June 8, 2008

Dear Peter,

    I¡¯m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.

    Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as youll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV programmes and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.

    Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.

    Try and write me in Chinese next time.

    Best wishes,

Li Hua

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假定你是李华，你从电视上看到甲型H1N1流感（H1N1 flu）仍在美国流行,你正在美国上学的笔友Jack向你询问防护建议。

建议：1. 尽量待在家里, 少去人多的地方；

2. 勤洗手, 讲卫生；

3. 多开窗, 保持空气新鲜；

4. 多吃水果蔬菜。

注意: 1. 词数100左右；

2. 开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。

Dear Jack,

    I¡¯m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to protect yourself from H1N1 flu.

One possible version:

Dear Jack,

   I¡¯m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to protect yourself from H1N1 flu.

    Here are a few suggestions. First, to stay away from this disease, you had better stay at home as much as possible and not go to places where there are many people. Then, wash your hands more often to keep them clean.

    Besides, it is necessary to open the window to have more fresh air in the room. And you should eat more fruits and vegetables to keep yourself fit and strong.

    So far the disease is not so deadly as it seems to be. Do be at ease! Take care and youll be OK.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

应用文(书信) Ⅱ

【典题在线】                    （2009¡¤全国Ⅱ）

假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Sarah 打算暑期来北京旅游，来信询问改建后前门大街的情况。请你写封回信，简单介绍以下内容：

1. 简况：前门大街长800余米，有600多年的历史、300余家商铺；   

2. 位置：天安门广场南面；   

3. 交通：公共汽车17、69、59等路，地铁2号线；   

4. 特色：步行街、无轨电车、茶馆、剧院等。  

参考词汇：步行街 pedestrian street   

无轨电车 trolley car   

地铁 subway   

注意：    1. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；   

2. 开头语已为你写好，但不计入总词数。

Dear Sarah,

Thank you for your letter for asking about the rebuilt Qianmen street. Here is something about it.

Your sincerely,

Li Hua

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Dear Sarah,

Thank you for your letter for asking about     (某地). Here is something about it.

     (某地) is a famous street/museum/city/university of over     (年). （按顺序介绍）Along     (某地), there are more than     (地方，商店，大楼等).  As the street/museum/city/university is     (某位置), just to/in/on the south/east/west/north of     , it¡¯s very convenient to     (做某事，如乘车去，步行去等). You may       (去的方式). （此地的特色）    . I¡¯m sure youll like it.

【佳篇品读】

Dear Sarah,

Thank you for your letter for asking about the rebuilt Qianmen Street. Here is something about it.

    Qianmen Street is a famous street of over 600 years old. Along this 800meter street, there are more than 300 shops. As the street is in the center of Beijing, just to the south of Tiananmen Square, it¡¯s very convenient to get there by bus. You may take Buses No. 17, 69 or 59. Subway Line 2 has a stop there too. Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street, but there are trolley cars to take you not only to the shops, but also to chatters and teahouses where you can experience a truly Chinese way of life. Im sure youll like it.

Your sincerely,

Li Hua

【模仿show】

下面是光明中学的示意图。假如你是王伟，请根据示意图和图后的说明写一篇120词左右的短文向你的美国朋友Peter介绍这所学校。

示意图说明：

1.①¡ª④篮球场（basketball court）；⑤餐厅；⑥学生宿舍；⑦老师宿舍；⑧花坛；⑨花坛（flower bed）；

2.所有大楼四周都种有灌木和花草；

3.学校占地130亩，有100多年的历史；

4.学生大约有3000人；教师有150人。学校在市中心以西10公里处，周围安静，校园优美，给学生提供了很好的学习环境。

One possible version:

Dear Peter,

Thank you for your letter for asking about the Guangming School. Here is something about it.

Guangming High School is a famous school of over 100 years. It is in the west of the city, with the Chengxi River running nearby. It covers an area of 130 mu. When you enter the school, you can see a big flower bed in front of you, and two large buildings on both sides¡ªthe library on your right and the teaching building on your left. Walking on further, you will find the gymnasium, which is the most beautiful building on the campus, with another round flower bed in front. Behind it, there lie four basketball courts. Next to the courts is the sports ground. Along its east side stand three buildings¡ªthe dining hall, and two dormitories for the students and teachers. All the buildings are surrounded by bushes and flowers.

Wang Wei

应用文(书信) Ⅲ 

【典题在线】（2009¡¤陕西）

假定你是李华。在一个英文网络论坛上, 你看到一个名叫Grownup的中学生发帖（post）寻求帮助, 请根据帖子的内容、写作要点和要求回贴。

写作要点：

1. 告诉Grownup要理解母亲；

2. 给Grownup提出解决问题的具体建议。

要求：

1. 内容充实, 结构完整, 语意连贯;

2. 书写须清晰、工整。

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Dear Grownup,

As a      , I understand your situation. The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers. However,        . Here are a few suggestions.

First,      . (这样做的理由)        .

Second,        .  (这样做的理由)         .

【佳篇品读】

Dear Grownup,

    As a student of your age, I understand your situation. The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers. However, it should be wise not to do anything that may hurt her feelings. Here are a few suggestions.

    First, its advisable to talk more with your mom. Hearttoto talks help you understand each other better. They are also opportunities to let her know your ideas and attitudes toward many things.

    Second, you should learn to do your own things well, proving to your mom that you are already a ¡°Grownup¡±. Its even better if you could share more of the housework, such as cleaning, washing and cooking.

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假如你叫李华，你在网上看到有人以Depressed为名，寻求帮助。事情是这样的：高考临近，他非常着急，可总是静不下心来复习。你回帖告诉他解决的办法：一、多出去参加体育锻炼，这样可以分散一会注意力；二、把复习的内容做好计划，这样可以按时间复习，避免慌乱。

要求:

1. 可适当增加一些情节;

2. 词数:100左右。

One possible version:

Dear Depressed,

    As a student of your age, I understand your situation. The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers. However, it should be wise to do something that stops the situation. Here are a few suggestions.

    First, its advisable to take some exercises after class. In doing so you may forget the hard work for a while and you may refresh yourself when you begin your study again.

    Second, you should arrange your study properly. It¡¯s better to do the right thing at the right time. You dont need to feel depressed then.

     Hope you get better soon and make great progress.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

应用文(书信)Ⅳ

【写作说明】

通过书信反映现实存在的一些事情是高考常见的形式。这一类作文中，首先我们要注意书信的格式，然后直接反映情况，接下来提出自己的看法或者解决办法，最后是与对方的探讨。

【典题在线】                        （2009¡¤湖南）

假设你是某中学新老师李红，请给你的朋友张华写一封信，告诉他你第一天上课的情况，主要内容如下：

1. 描述一件课堂上令你印象深刻的事情；

2. 介绍你处理该事的方式；

3. 谈谈你的感想。  

注意：1. 词数不少于120个;

2. 可适当发挥想像，增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 文中不得出现与本人及学校相关的任何真实信息。

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Dear     (姓名),

Now I want to tell you an impressive story that happened       (某个地方).

                    (以时间顺序讲述事件的起因、发生、发展、结局).

From the story I felt we should        (自己的看法，或者由此事产生的认识). Do you think so? Im looking forward to your reply.

Yours truly,

Li Hong

【佳篇品读】

Dear Zhang Hua,

    Now I want to tell you an impressive story that happened on my first lesson.

    On hearing the bell, students ran into the classroom as quickly as they can. But a boy, Li Ming, whose father died a month ago, was late for the class. He stood outside the classroom, silently. I smiled to him and let him come in. After a while, he cried on his desk. Then I walked to him and asked what had happened. He told me that his mother was ill and he had to take some medicine for her. At the same time, he apologized to me for his lateness. Moved by his words, I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song named Mother for the students. How time flies! Class was over before I realized it.

    From the story I felt we should respect our parents and do our best to help them. Do you think so? Im looking forward to your reply.

Yours truly,

Li Hong

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假定你是李华，在网上你看到一群中学生在殴打一名学生的视频(video)。视频中，几个中学生对这名同学先是谩骂，然后拳脚相加。这些人还对着镜头做着各种怪动作或者表情。旁观者不仅不制止，还在为这几个打人的学生鼓掌(applaud)。请根据以下要求给报社写封信：

1. 描述事情的经过；

2. 谈谈你的感想。

注意：1. 可适当发挥想像，增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2. 文中不得出现与本人及学校相关的任何真实信息。

One possible version:

Dear editor,

    Now I want to tell you an impressive story happened on the Internet.

T    he other day I happened to watch a video on the Internet. Several senior students first said ill words to a boy and then they knocked with fists and kicked him with foots. No passersby went  to stop them. Instead they laughed, and even applauded to cheer the bad boys up. In the end that boys mouth and nose were bleeding badly and those boys made ugly faces to the camera, which made me very angry.

    From the story I felt we should respect each other and help each other when in trouble. Besides, our schools should make strict rules to stop such bad behaviour happening again. Do you think so? Im looking forward to your reply.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

应用文(发言稿)

【典题在线】

(2010¡¤01¡¤浙江安江中学、寿昌中学、严州中学联考)

5月10日，为了庆祝母亲节，你们班开展了以¡°尊敬父母¡±为主题的活动。假如你是校英语报记者。请按下列要点用英语写一则演讲稿。

1. 时间：母亲节(5月10日)

2. 现象：大多数同学是独生子女，只看重自己不顾及父母

3. 宗旨：让每位学生都理解父母，尊敬父母

4. 活动：（1）送一份自制的礼物给父母；

（2）记住父母的生日，并表达祝愿；

（3）给父母写一封信¡­¡­；

（4）父母上下班主动打招呼;

¡­¡­

5. 感想或简短评论

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Ladies and gentlemen:

          (日期), we had an activity         (活动内容), aiming to       (目的).

    As we know,     (现状). Therefore, we held the activity to show         . In this activity,some of us       (人们的表现一); some         (表现二); some         (表现三); some           (表现四).

    After this activity,          (别人以及自己的感受)

    Thank you！

【佳篇品读】

Ladies and gentlemen:

    On May 10th, we had an activity in celebration of mother¡¯s day, aiming to let everyone respect and considerate of his parents.

    As we know, most of us students today are the only child in our family, we often regard ourselves as the center of the family, without caring much about our parents. Therefore, we held the activity to show our respect to our parents. In this activity, some of us gave presents made by ourselves to parents; some remembered parents¡¯ birthdays and decided to express our good wishes to them; some said hello to parents when they went to work and returned home after work; some even wrote a letter and had a hearttoheart talk with parents.

     After this activity, all of us felt it was worthwhile. We developed an awareness of respecting our parents. What an unforgettable and meaningful day it is!

    Thank you!

【模仿show】

现在倡导¡°文明从我做起¡±，以改变目前社会上的一些不良风气。为了支持这一活动，4月20日（星期日）你们学校组织学生走上街头进行献爱心活动。有的帮助老人过马路，有的帮助打扫街道，有的宣传文明用语。

对这一做法，你们班同学有的赞成，有的反对。你的看法如何？请根据以上提示用英语写一则演讲稿。

One possible version:

Ladies and gentlemen:

    On Sunday, April 20th, we had an activity aiming to let everyone know that civilization must start from ourselves.

    As we know, in our actual society, some people are rude to others, and even some give great harm to others. And we can see many unproper behaviours. Therefore, we held the activity to suport the idea that civilization must be made by ourselves. In this activity,some of us helped clean the road; some helped the old cross the road; some made people know what is civilization in our words and actions.

    After this activity, most of us felt it was worthwhile. But some thought we were just making show, we can¡¯t change the society with a single action. Of course, we can¡¯t change these things with one action, but I think if each of us do good things regularly, we will have a good social environment.

    Thank you!

半开放式作文Ⅰ

【写作指导】

半开放式作文是近年来英语学科书面表达的一个趋势和要求，是一种常见题型。所谓¡°半开放¡±是指试题给出部分要点，考生自己再增加一些要点。这样的作文可以分为两大部分:试题给出的材料和自己增加的材料。在写给出材料时一定注意不要遗漏要点，更不要曲解试题的意思。在写自己增加部分时也不可以随意发挥，要吃透命题人的意思。例如:关于中学生是否可以把手机带进教室，我们最好不赞成带手机进教室，因为命题人一般是大中学校的老师，他们是不会赞成学生带手机进教室的。

【典题在线】（2010¡¤01¡¤山东平邑¡¤阶段性质检）

假如你们班在¡°珍爱生命，拒闯红灯¡±的教育活动中，召开了一次主题班会。请你根据下表内容，用英语写一篇短文。

注意：1.内容可适当发挥，注意行文连贯;

2.参考词汇：乱穿马路jaywalk;

3.词数：120-150。

【模板展示】

    Recently we held a class meeting to discuss the problem of                 (讨论的问题). As we can see,                               (这种事件的现实情况).              (造成的结果).

    It is really a pity to see all this in our society. To deal with the situation, the government has taken some measures.             (具体已经采取了什么样的措施). We should              (你认为还要怎么做).

【佳篇品读】

Recently we held a class meeting to discuss the problem of passersby crossing the street while the traffic light is red. As we can see, some passersby dont obey traffic rules and jaywalk frequently. This blocks traffic, seriously affects drivers and causes accidents to happen, endangering the safety of passersby and drivers. In a word, jaywalking produces negative effects and does not help develop good social behaviour.

It is really a pity to see all this in our society. To deal with the situation, the government has taken some measures. When caught jaywalking, the passersby are criticized so that they will become aware of the dangers of doing so, or they are fined on the spot. Sometimes the traffic police will report jaywalkers at their workplace and expose them to the public. However, it will still take a long time to stop passersby from jaywalking. We should start from ourselves right now.

【模仿show】

假如你们班在¡°爱护环境，拯救地球¡±的教育活动中，召开了一次主题班会。请你根据以下要点，用英语写一篇短文。

1. 目前的环境状况：气候异常；空气、水、土壤等污染严重;

2. 政府采取的措施：限制高污染企业投产；对环境时时检测;

3. 你认为还有哪些有更有效的措施?

One possible version:

    Recently we held a class meeting to discuss the problem of the global pollution. As we can see, our surroundings have been badly polluted. Our air, water, and soil have become poisonous. And the weather is not quite normal.

    It is really a pity to see all this in our society. To deal with the situation, the government has taken some measures. Firms that  badly polluted the environments are not allowed to be built. And our environments are under close attention by the local departments. Things are getting better.           However, it will still take a long time to stop the condition. We should have a strong sense of environmental protection right now.

半开放式作文Ⅱ

【典题在线】(2009¡¤福建)

某英语报社拟成立¡°微笑俱乐部¡±，现向全球征募会员。要求申请者提交一篇题为¡°I want to Smile¡±的英语短文。请你以申请者的身份，根据以下思路图的提示用英语写一篇短文。

注意：根据思路图适当展开，以使行文连贯

【模板展示】

I Want to Smile

           (第一要点概括句，例如:There are many advantages of smiling.)                    (分要点一).              (分要点二). So           (结论).

    First,             (第二要点概括).         （展开一句或两句）.  Then                      (第三要点).                   （展开一句或两句）.

    In a word, (或In my opinion/Personally)      (总结；提出自己的看法等).

【佳篇品读】

    There are many advantages of smiling. It can not only make us happy, but also please others. If we smile at life, life will smile on us in return. So I want to smile at all whenever and wherever possible.

    First, I would like to smile at my parents because they have given me life and taken all the troubles to bring me up. They arrange almost everything for me. With their help, I have made great progress. I would like to say ¡°Thank you¡± to them with a smile. Then my smile should go to myself, for only in this way can I gain more confidence in smiling my troubles away and live a better life. 

    In a word, let¡¯s greet every day with a smile. Tomorrow is another day.

【模仿show】

假设你叫李华，你的美国笔友Johnson想和家人来中国定居，请你帮他在A、B两个城市中做出选择。下面的图表是对这两座城市在就业、娱乐和环境等方面所作的对比。请你根据该表提供的信息用英语给他写封电子邮件，提出你的建议并说明理由。

注意：1. 图表左边的数字说明人们对这两个城市的喜爱程度。

2. 词数:120左右。短文开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

One possible version:

Dear Johnson,

    I¡¯m so glad to learn that you and your family are coming to settle down in China．

     After a careful study of the information about the two cities, I suggest you choose to live in City A.

    First, City A is a more popular city to live in. The environment in City A is better than that in City B and the climate there is very pleasant. Then, there are many places for entertainment where you can enjoy yourselves in your spare time. As for the employment, though the job opportunities are not so good as in City B, yet I don¡¯t think it¡¯s a problem for you as a teacher of English.

    In a word, I think City A is a better choice, but it¡¯s up to you to decide. Hope to hear from you again.

Yours,

Li Hua

开放作文

【写作指导】

开放作文只给出主题或两三点提示或一段素材，然后由考生在此基础上充分发挥想像力，自由创作。因此，写作时要把握好给出的材料，然后据此进行拓展延伸，这一点很重要。

【典题在线】（2009¡¤北京）

请根据下面的提示，写一篇短文，词数不少于50。

In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.

【模板展示】

What an interesting picture!            (图画内容的描述).                        (自己对图画的认识).            (由此展开的社会或生活话题).

【佳篇品读】

What an interesting picture! A Western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of noodles. He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks. He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot. At first glance, I think its a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles. The man in the picture is trying to copy us. Obviously, he is doing in the hard way. Maybe using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we dont need to copy others ways of thinking. Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.

【模仿show】

请根据下面的提示，写一篇短文。词数:不少于50。

In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.

One possible version:

    What an interesting picture! A boy is climbing a high mountain, sweating all over and having a tired look. In spite of many large rocks blocking his way, the exhausted boy is still struggling on the steep mountainside, because he knows that there is a rainbow behind the mountain.

    What the picture conveys is that although the way to success seems long and difficult, there is still hope like the rainbow in our hearts. So long as we are confident and never give up, we are sure to achieve success. In everyday life, all of us are facing many difficulties and experiencing great hardships just like the boy. If we are determined to get to the top, well see the rainbow!