幸福树根:中考真题解析版汇编书面表达-应用文

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2011年全国各地市110份中考真题解析版汇编书面表达-应用文
【题型诠释】
应用文部分通常是给出一部分提示,按照应用文体的格式和要求完成短文。
【知识点链接】
我们初中阶段学过的应用文体主要有日记、书信、请假条、留言条、通知等。各种文体的相关知识希望大家熟练掌握。
一、书信
1.书信的格式及语言特色
英文书信的格式一般由六部分组成,即信端、信内地址、称呼、正文、结束语及签名。
1)信端:信端也叫信头,指发信人的地址和日期。写在信纸的右上角,可以从靠近信纸的中央写起。信端上面要留空白。应先写发信人地址,后写日期。地址的写法与汉语不同,应按由小到大的规则。日期写在地址的下面。其顺序是:月、日、年,或日、月、年。在年份之前有一个逗号。例如:April 19,2004或19 April,2004。
2)信内地址:位于信纸的左上角,比信端低一、二行,其次序为先写收信人的姓名与头衔,再写其地址。信内地址常常可以省略
3)称呼:指对收信人的称呼。写在信内地址之下,相距一、二行,从信纸的左边开始,不空格。给熟悉的人写信一般用Dear+姓名,或 Dear Miss/Mr/Mrs + 姓。例如:Dear Su Rui,Dear Ms Su。
4)正文:指信的主体部分。写在称呼之下,相距一、二行,由左边第三或第五个字母开始写起。每一段的起首都同第一行齐头。第一段也可顶格,但以下各段应空格。
5)结束语:指正文下面的结尾客套语。位置应低于正文一、二行。一般从信纸的中间稍右写起,第一个字母大写,末尾用一逗号。在非正式的社交信中常用Yours sincerely。若对方是亲密的朋友,可用Yours,Sincerely yours等。
6)签名:写在结束语的下面。
2.信封的写法
英文信封的写法与汉语不同。收信人的姓名及地址应写在信封中下部。且先写姓名,后写地址。而寄信人的姓名及地址应写在信封的左上角,若是普通书信,一般可写在信封背面。
二、日记
1.日记的格式及语言特色
日记的格式包括日期、天气和正文三部分。
1)日期:位于正文以上一、二行的左上角,一般有星期和具体日期,星期在前,日期在后,有时也可以直接写明日期。如:(Monday)2nd May,1999或(Monday)May2nd,  1999。
2)天气:与日期同行,位于正文右上方。常用sunny,rainy,cloudy等形容词。
3)正文:正文的第一段一般与日期对齐,另起一段应向右移动三至五个字母。
三、留言
1.留言的格式与语言特色
1)普通留言条:①不必写明地点;②可写年月日或星期几,在多数情况下还要写明具体时间(几点几分);时间(在前)与日期(在后)应写在便条的右上端。③可加上或省略结尾语。若加上结尾语,其位置与书信相同,常用Sincerely,Yours等;④署名在结尾语下面;⑤称呼可用××同志/先生/小姐等。
2)电话留言条(Telephone Message):电话留言的书写顺序为①From:sb.(电话来自某人);②To: sb.(给某人);③Date(日期);④ rime(时间);⑤Message(电话内容)。
四、贺卡
1.贺卡的格式及语言特色
贺卡一般由称呼、贺词和签名三部分构成。
1)称呼:指祝贺人对受贺人的称呼,位于左上方,常由to引出,如To dear teacher’, To my dearest Father and Mother等。但受贺人前也有不加to的,如Mr and Mrs Read等。
2)贺词:通常写一些固定的贺卡用语,或根据实际情况写一些简短的表示感谢和良好祝愿的话语,如Happy Teachers’ Day,With Best Wishes for a Happy New Year,Thank you for.…I hope…,Good luck,Best wishes等。
3)祝贺人签名:常由from引出(写在贺卡的右下方)如From your student  Li Lei, From Mr and Mrs Smith,但姓名前也有不加 from的。
五、通知
1.通知的格式及语言特色
通知是某个单位、团体需要将一件事告诉其他几个单位时,或同行业之间有什么事情需要协商,或有什么活动需要共同参加时所使用的一种应用文,其形式有书信形式与公告形式两种。
1)书信形式:采用这一形式,应省去信头和结尾,正文开头应直截了当,点明要通知的是何事,原因是什么。若内容较多,可分段书写,文字务求简洁、明白、准确。。
2)公告形式:在头一行中间位置写上 NOTICE一词,通知的日期可写在右下方,也可省略。
六、启事
1.启事的格式及语言特色
启事的格式一般由四部分组成,即启事的名称、正文、写启事的单位姓名和启示的日期,
1)启事的名称:初中阶段学过寻物启事(Lost)与失物招领(Found),应写在第一行中间部位。
2)正文:第二行空三个字母处开始书写、启事的内容要写得简明扼要,使人一目了然。
3)单位姓名:应写在右下方。
4)日期:写在单位及姓名下面。若是机关团体的启事,一般要加盖公章。有些启事还要详细地写出自己的通讯地址及邮政编码,便于有关单位或个人前来联系。
【名题例析】
【2011黑龙江绥化市】V.Writing (本题共15分,A题5分,B题10分)(注意:文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名,否则不赋分)
(A)加假如你叫张强,在昨天下午的篮球比赛中不小心伤了左臂,医生建议你在家休息两天,因此你要向班主任赵老师请假。请根据以上信息,写一则40词左右的请假条。
Asking for leave
Dear Miss Zhao,
I am sorry to tell you that I can’t go to school ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you!
Your student,
Zhang Qiang
One possible version:
Asking for leave
May 10th
Dear Miss Zhao,
I am sorry to tell you that I can’t go to school today. I hurt my left arm (1分) in the basketball match  yesterday afternoon. The doctor told me to have a rest at home for two days, so I will /have to ask for two days/two-day leave. I hope I will get well and return to school soon.
Thank you!
Your student,
Zhang Qiang
【真题荟萃】
【2011黑龙江齐齐哈尔】
( A )     假如你叫张强,在昨天下午的篮球比赛中不小心伤了左臂,医生建议你在家休息两天, 因此你要向班主任赵老师请假。请根据以上信息写一则40词左右的请假条。
Asking for Leave
May 10 th
Dear Miss Zhao,
I'm sorry to tell you that I can't go to school today.
Thank you!
Your student,
Zhang Qiang
One possible version:
Asking for Leave
May 10th
Dear Miss Zhao,
I'm sorry to tell you that I can't go to school today. I hurt my left arm (1分) in the basketball match (1分) yesterday afternoon (1分).The doctor told me to have a rest at home for two days (1分), so I will/ have to ask for two days’ / two-day leave (1分). I hope I’ll get well and return to school soon.
Thank you!
Your student,
Zhang Qiang
(2011贵州毕节)第九部分   书面表达(30分)
A.    学校定于6月28日14点30分在学校操场召开全校学生大会,大会内容为远离毒品(drug),珍爱生命,要求按时参加。请你于6月27日以学生会(the Student Union)名义用英语写一则通知,词数不少于20个,请把答案写在答题卡相应的位置。(共10分)
A.Notice
Girls and boys,
May I have your attention, please?
I’m very glad to tell you a good thing. We will have a st udent meeting on the school playground. It is at 14:30 on June 28th. The meeting is about how to stay away from drugs and cherish your lives.
Please don’t be late.
That’s all, thank you.
June 27th
The Student Union
【2011山东菏泽】七、书面表达(满分20分)
假如你是李明,在菏泽国际牡丹花会之前,请给你的美国笔友Lily写一封信,介绍菏泽牡丹(如悠久的种植历史、数百个品种等等),并邀请她前来观赏。
字数:80—100字(首尾句已给出,不记入所要求的总字数)
供你参考的词汇有:
be famous for…以……闻名; national flower国花; Heze International Peony Fair菏泽国际牡丹花会;the peony garden牡丹园
Dear Lily,
Yours,
Li Ming
Dear Lily
How are thing s going. Heze international peony fair is coming. Will you please come and visit when you are free? I am sure you will get to know more about Heze and have a good time here. Heze is famous for peony and peony is its national flower. It has a long history with hundreds of kinds. The peony garden is very beautiful which is full of all kinds of peonies. When you come, I will be your guide. I'm sure you will be satisfied with it.
Yours
Li Ming
【2011乌鲁木齐】书面表达 (满分15分)
学校将要举行演讲比赛,请以My Dream为题写一篇参赛演讲稿。注意:1.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校。 2.词数:80歌左右。 3. 开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
My dream
Hi, everyone___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
One possible version:
Hi, everyone。Everybody has his dream job. I also have my dream job. My dream is to work for foreign tourists as a tour guide.
Why do I want to be a tour guide? First of all, I‘m an outgoing girl, and I like doing some exciting things. Maybe being a tour guide is the best choice. If I become a tour guide, I can   travel all around China, and know more about our country. Then I will tell the foreign tourists about our colorful history. Second, I like making friends. If I work as a tour guide, I can make a lot of friends all over the world. This may be great. Perhaps someday my foreign friends will ask me to visit their countries. I really like to go to their countries to know something about their culture. What’s more, I like singing. Singing English songs is my favorite. I believe I will be popular with foreign tourists. Their trip will be excellent.
Now, I am still a middle school student. My job now is to work hard in school. Then I’ll go to university to learn something about being a tour guide. I’m sure I can be a qualified tour guide in the future [+网Z+X+X+K]
【2011天津】 假如你是某中学的一名学生。6月3日,是星期五,在放学回家的公交车上,你所经历的一件事情让你印象深刻。请根据以下要点用英语写一篇日记。
要点:
1. 一位老爷爷和十来岁的孙子上了车,老人拿着书包和小提琴;
2. 你给老人让座,老人的孙子却坐了下来,老人只得站在旁边;
3. 孩子大声喊着向老人要水喝,并将空水瓶扔到车上;
4. 你认为孩子应该尊敬、照顾老人,保持环境卫生。
参考词汇:孙子 grandson   空水瓶 empty bottle   保持……干净  keep……clean
要求: 1. 词数:80 – 100个。
2. 日记开头已给出,不计入总词数。
3. 要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
June 3, Friday                                                          Fine
On my way home on the bus, I saw __________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________June 3, Friday                                                          Fine
On my way home on the bus, I saw an old man get on with his grandson of about ten. He was carrying the boy’s schoolbag and a violin. I gave my seat to the old man at once. However, the boy sat down first. The old man had to stand nearby. After a while, the boy shouted to his grandpa for water and then dropped the empty bottle on the bus.
When I saw this, I got very angry. I think the boy should not only respect and take care of the old man but also keep the environment clean.
【2011山东泰安】第三节 写 作(共1题,满分15分)
假如你是李明,在网上看到一则美国某大学孔子学院招聘汉语老师的广告,请你根据信息内容,用英语给Mr.Smith写一封email,向他推荐一位符合条件的老师。
Age: 25~40
Language: fluent English & standard Chinese
Experience: familiar with Confucius ideas
Email: Efl.un.@.hotmail
注意:1. 词数:80~100词,信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 可适当增加细节,说明他/她的优势,文中不要提及真实的校名和人名。
3. 参考词汇:fluent adj.流利的  familiar adj.熟知的  standard n./adj.标准(的)
Confucius n.孔子  suitable adj.合适的  healthy adj.  introduce v.  get along well with  …
Dear Smith,
How are you? I’m very glad to introduce ____________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
(一)One possible version:
Dear Smith,
How are you? I’m very glad to introduce an English teacher to you. He is at the age of thirty. Though quite young, he has been teaching English for ten years. He can not only speak fluent English but also standard Chinese. What’s more, he is healthy, full of energy and is easy to get along with. Above all, he lives in the Confucius hometown. He is so familiar with the Confucius ideas that he can do well in his new work there. I’m sure that he is the most suitable Chinese teacher.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
【2011浙江台州】七.书面表达(本题有2小题,第76小题5分,第77小题15
分,共20分)
76.你校准备创办一份英语杂志,需要招聘记者,假如你叫Liu Peng,请用英语给杂志负责人Mr Chen写一封简单的应聘信,信的内容包含如下:
①性格外向;②喜欢写作;③擅长英语。
注意:信的部分内容已写好,你只需将称呼、署名和其它内容补充完整。
______ Mr Chen,
I’m a student of our school.________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________
Can I become a reporter of the English magazine?
Yours,
____________
One possible version:
_Dear_ Mr Chen,
I’m a student of our school. I am an outgoing boy. I like writing very much. And I am good at English.
Can I become a reporter of the English magazine?
Yours,
__Liu Peng___
【2011山东聊城】A
根据表中所给的内容设计一个英文信封。
收件人
姓名
Mr. White
地址
277 Broadway, New York City, USA
寄信人
姓名
Da Ming
地址
56 Liuyuan Road, Liaocheng City, Shandong province, China
Da Ming
56 Liuyuan Road, Liaocheng City,
Shandong province, China
Mr. White
277 Broadway, New York City, USA
【2011山东潍坊】八、写作(满分15分)
假设你是某英文杂志的“知心姐姐”(Agony Sister),Helen. 请阅读下面的这封求助信,并根据信的内容写一封回信。
要求:1. 80词左右;2. 文中不要出现作者本人的真实信息。
Dear Helen,
Last Sunday, my classmates and I went to the park. I wanted to take some photos. My father was out at that time, so I took his camera without telling her. Unfortunately, the camera went out of my bag and dropped on the ground when I was climbing the hill. It didn’t work at all. I put it back quietly after I returned home. And I haven’t told him till now. when I face my father, I feel terrible. What should I do?
Yours,
David
Dear David,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Helen
One possible version:
Dear David,
First, I think you'd better tell your father immediately. It you tell him the truth, he'll be
angry with you. But at least you'll prove how honest you are. Then I think you should offer to
pay. But you shouldn't use your pocket money. Yes, a camera is expensive, maybe you can't
afford it. If you offer to do some jobs around the house, he'll realize that you're truly sorry.
Oh, remember to be careful next tune.
Best wishes,
Helen
【2011湖北黄冈】第三节 书面表达(共1题,满分10分)
假如你是韩梅,对英语兴趣浓厚,但学习起来却很棘手。你知道,中国学生要想学好英语,练就听、说、读、写的技能很关键,掌握枯燥的语法更是必要。对于native speakers来说,是否也如此?因此,你打算给你远走加拿大的笔友Kate发一封电子邮件,谈谈这些问题。
注意:① 词数:80词左右;
②文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名词及其他相关信息,否则不予评分;
③邮件开头结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Kate,
I' m writing to you for some questions about learning English. ___________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________  I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Han Mei
Dear Kate,
I' m writing to you for some questions about learning English. You know I am very interested in English. But I’m not good at it. I find it hard to learn English and I feel very worried. I hear that it’s curial to practice listening, speaking, reading and writing. The most important is that we should learn English grammar. I don’t know how to study English well now. I know you do well in English. To your native speakers, how do you study English? Are you the same as me?  Can you tell me?
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Han Mei
III.【2011?铜仁】写作(20分)
温馨提示:(短文书写于答题卡卷II规定的位置。)
学校决定本周星期六(2011年5月14日)晚上以班为单位召开家长座谈会,会议将于七点半开始,地点是本班教室。届时将通报孩子在校学习情况,并就如何促使孩子学好功课征求家长意见。请你代替八年级(4)班班主任杨老师用英语向林涛的家长写一份邀请书。
要求:①格式正确,语言流畅,表达清楚;②书写规范,字迹清楚;③词数:70-80.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
One possible version:
INVITATION
Dear Mr/Mrs Lin;
I’m glad to invite you to come to our parents’ me eting in our school at 7:30 p.m. on Saturday, May 14th. We will hold the parents’ meeting in the classroom of Class 4, Grade 8.At the meeting we will tell you something about your son’s study. We will also listen to your advice on how to improve all his lessons. We hope you can come on time.
Hope to see you then!
Sincerely
Mr. Yang
【江西省2011】五、书面表达 (15分)
假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Daniel计划今年暑假来江西度假,他向你了解江西城市生活和农村生活的情况,以便选择度假地点,请根据下图提供的关键词,给他写一封邮件,先介绍城市生活和农村生活的相同点和不同点,然后说说你自己更喜 欢哪种生活,并说明理由 。
城市生活:
supermarket. restaurant. apartment. car. bus. cinema. club. park
农村生活:
vegetable. rice. house. motorbike. bicycle. visiting neighbors
五、书面表达(15分)
One Possible Version;
Dear Daniel,
I'm very happy that you are coming to Jiangxi to spend your summer holiday. There are some similarities and differences between city life and country life. Both in the city and in the country, people's life is getting better and better. They pay more and more . attention to keeping fit. However, there are some differences. In the city people go to supermarkets to buy what they need. They eat at home or in restaurants. They live in apartments and travel around by car or bus. After work, they go to cinemas, clubs or parks to relax themselves. In the country, people grow vegetables and rice by themselves.  They live in houses and ride motorbikes or bicycles to go around. In their spare time they would like to visit their neighbors or watch TV at home. As for me, I prefer to live in the city because there are more places to enjoy myself. I often go to libraries, bookstores and science museums, where I can learn much about the world.
I am looking forward to meeting you! Best wishes!
Li Hua
【2011山东德州】八、写作(共1题,计15分)
假如你是张文,八年级四班的班长。你们班排练了一部英文课本剧(an English textbook play),准备本周六下午4:00在学校礼堂(the school hall)演出。请你用英语给学校的外籍教师Terry写一封80字左右的E-mail,邀请他来观看演出,并在演出结束时发言。
注意:1. 可增加细节,使文章连贯完整;2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Terry,
Hi, I’m Zhang Wen, monitor of Class 4, Grade 8.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
We are all looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Zhang Wen
范文:
Dear Terry,
Hi, I’m Zhang Wen, m onitor of Class 4, Grade 8. I would like to invite you to enjoy our play. Our class have practised an English textbook play. I think it is wonderful. It will be held in our school hall at 4. p.m. this Saturday. I hope you can come to see it. I believe you must enjoy it. At the ending of the play, we also hope you can give us a small talk. You can give us some advice about the English textbook play. I am sure we must improve our level.
We are all looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
【2011湖北十堰】VI.初级写作(本题一节,计15分)
针对社会上人们对90后年轻人的某些评论,英语课上同学们与老师就此展开了讨论。作为一名90后的中学生,请参考下面的提示词写一篇 英语发言稿,展示真实的你。
要求:1. 语句通顺,表达准确,内容连贯,可适当发挥。
2. 文中不能出现真实校名、姓名等相关信息;
3. 词数:不少于80词。发言稿的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:selfish(自私的) ; Internet; believe in oneself; high ideals(崇高理想); in style, creative
As we know, most of us are the only child in our families now. ____________________
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We are growing up. We are sure to do better.
One possible version
As we know, most of us are the only child in our families now. Our parents love us very much and they try their best t o do everything for us, which make us become selfish. Usually we are so concentrate on the Internet that we have less time to communicate with others.
There is no doubt that we have our own advantage s as well.
We teenagers have high ideals. We always believe in ourselves and never say “die”. Meanwhile we are in style. New ideas can be easily accepted by us. You can find out that creative thinking is full of our life. We also know how to respecet your parents and teachers.
We are growing up. We are sure to do better.
【2011?四川成都】五、书面表达。(计10分)
假设你是小伟。你的室友大明昨天接到你朋友Maria的电话。她正在研究中国的节日文化,需要你的帮助。现在,请你根据大明所留的便条内容,给Maria回一封电子邮件。
Xiaowei,
Your friend Maria made a phone call to you yesterday. She wants to know the traditional Chinese festival—the Lantern Festival. She wants you to tell her why we like it, when and how we spend it (tell her at least 3 activities). Send an email to her at marial988@ gmail. com. Please ask her what they do during Christmas for me.
Darning
注意:
1)电子邮件的格式和开头已给出,不计入总词数(80-100词);
2)表达完整、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3)提示词:sweet rice dumplings汤圆 play with firecrackers燃放鞭炮 the Lantern Festival 元宵节
To: marial988@gmail.com                                                From; xiaowei@sina.com
Subject: the Lantern Festival
Dear Maria,
How are you? You asked me something about the traditional Chinese festival—the Lantern Festival. Actually, ______________________________________________________________________.
Love
Xiaowei

One possible version:
To: marial988@ gmail. Com                                From; xiaowei? sina. com
Subject: the Lantern Festival
Dear Maria,
How are you? You asked me something about the traditional Chinese festival—the Lantern Festival. Actually, we have it at the end of the Spring Festival. We like the Lantern Festival because we can enjoy beautiful views at night. Usually, we eat a kind of sweet rice dumplings called yuanxiao, and we go out to watch colourful lanterns with our family members. When it gets dark, it looks beautiful everywhere with lots of lanterns. We also enjoy some firework shows or play with firecrackers ourselves. It's great fun!
By the way, what do you usually do during Christmas?
Love
Xiaowei
【2011山东德州】八、写作(共1题,计15分)
假如你是张文,八年级四班的班长。你们班排练了一部英文课本剧(an English textbook play),准备本周六下午4:00在学校礼堂(the school hall)演出。请你用英语给学校的外籍教师Terry写一封80字左右的E-mail,邀请他来观看演出,并在演出结束时发言。
注意:1. 可增加细节,使文章连贯完整;2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Terry,
Hi, I’m Zhang Wen, monitor of Class 4, Grade 8.
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We are all looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Zhang Wen
范文:
参考一、Dear Terry,
Hi, I’m Zhang Wen, monitor of Class 4, Grade 8. I’m writing to ask if you will be free on Saturday. Our class have made an English textbook play. We are going to put it on at the school hall on Saturday. Time is 4:00 p.m. The play is about a famous English story. I’m sure you will enjoy it. We hope you can come, and we do hope you can give a speech at he end of the performance. We’d like you to give us some tips about English learning. If you can come, please let me know.
We are all looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Zhang Wen